На суд пикабушынй
Привет, Пикабу. Для меня очень странно быть здесь, это мой первый пост. До этого я год просто просматривал сайт, но зарегестрировался только сейчас. Собственно в чем суть: я довольно долго увлекаюсь поэзией и довольно часто пишу стихи.Так как я еще и музыкант, то я еще и пишу музыку. И с недавнего времени занялся англоязычными тестами для песен, но если честно я не очень силен в этом. Да и обычную поэзию никогда не публиковал.Жутко стесняюсь. Но мне хочется узнать отношение других к ней. Те друзья, что видели мое творчество, хвалили его, но я хочу объективной оценки.Мне интересно, воспримет ли слушатель такую песню.
Поэтому вотъ.
Конечно не самая сильная работа, но вроде не совсем жуть
Imagine a beauty, who love rocknroll
She's so independent and she's really hot
Be careful with her said one of friends
But I haven't listen him
'cause it was too late
She is cute angry, she gonna to hurt
But when she is smiling you're not on the earth
You might think she is evil, but it is mistake
At real she is beauty and easily embraced
Sometimes it is funny, sometimes I afraid
Maybe it's love or it is something else
It's really strange feeling. Am I ok?
But If I miss her it will be the worst day
For me is no matter how hard it can be
I'll never allow this becoming a real
Maybe I'm Madman.Yes, I might be
But this is my chosen,I don't want to be free
Now I want to play blues or do rocknroll
I feel encourage, I feel like a god
I want to play boogie I want to create
When you fell in love you would do the same
Imagine a beauty, who love rocknroll
She's so independent and she's really hot
Be careful with her said one of friends
But I haven't listen him
'cause it was too late
P.S. если найдете опечатки, ошибки итд, то пожалуйста, сообщите :3
Поэтому вотъ.
Конечно не самая сильная работа, но вроде не совсем жуть
Imagine a beauty, who love rocknroll
She's so independent and she's really hot
Be careful with her said one of friends
But I haven't listen him
'cause it was too late
She is cute angry, she gonna to hurt
But when she is smiling you're not on the earth
You might think she is evil, but it is mistake
At real she is beauty and easily embraced
Sometimes it is funny, sometimes I afraid
Maybe it's love or it is something else
It's really strange feeling. Am I ok?
But If I miss her it will be the worst day
For me is no matter how hard it can be
I'll never allow this becoming a real
Maybe I'm Madman.Yes, I might be
But this is my chosen,I don't want to be free
Now I want to play blues or do rocknroll
I feel encourage, I feel like a god
I want to play boogie I want to create
When you fell in love you would do the same
Imagine a beauty, who love rocknroll
She's so independent and she's really hot
Be careful with her said one of friends
But I haven't listen him
'cause it was too late
P.S. если найдете опечатки, ошибки итд, то пожалуйста, сообщите :3