Мой первый стих на английском. Интересно каждое адекватное мнение, прошу пяти минут внимания.
as rumors say i need to play
the song they want, to write they need,
i just will stay away for day
to try to make the heart to feel.
they try to teach us lots of new
but their "new" is not so, true,
its best to tell us how to love,
not cruel love, its all sins' half.
be ready to enjoy the way
which will provide u through the days..
enjoy the time u feel the earth,
the air and the man u worth
the song they want, to write they need,
i just will stay away for day
to try to make the heart to feel.
they try to teach us lots of new
but their "new" is not so, true,
its best to tell us how to love,
not cruel love, its all sins' half.
be ready to enjoy the way
which will provide u through the days..
enjoy the time u feel the earth,
the air and the man u worth